Tuesday, August 24, 2010

New Fiction: Elephant Girl, Chapter 1


I just posted the first chapter of my novel, Elephant Girl. I'd love to hear your thoughts and feedback.

Elephant Girl, Chapter 1: Metropolis

6 comments:

  1. OH MY GOODNESS !
    I am so excited to read this.... I love the title name... feedback to come !

    cheers, parsnip

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  2. Hi Aki,
    thank you so much for sharing this chapter with us.
    I loved it! It made me also feel very natsukashii... (I lived for almost 2 years in Tokyo).
    I'm looking forward to reading the entire book ;-)

    Gregory

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  3. Parsnip - can't wait to hear what you think!

    Gregory - domo arigato gozaimasu!
    Thank you for reading, and for your kind remarks. Hope to have the entire book in some form soon. :)

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  4. aki-chan!! enjoyed it!! such details i was looking through your eyes! fitting title. does take u back! natsukashii. ya u do feel a bit.
    look 4ward 2 2!! ^_^

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  5. Thanks for taking time to read it, Snow-san! So glad you like it - yokatta ne! more to follow... :)

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  6. Finally sat down to read this and you pulled me right in. So much visual information that sets the story. I felt like I was there with you.
    Looking forward to reading more.

    cheers, parsnip

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